Narrative Writing

Walt: I am learning to write interesting paragraphs

In the most horrifying village of all time, there lived the evilest family in the world. There was a girl, mum and a dad. Their names were Tabitha the girl, nine hundred years old, Maleficent the mum, one thousand, three hundred years old and Dracula the dad, two thousand years old. The village was cold hearted, nothing was ever to be coloured, people walking as dead people with slouched backs staring watching every move you do , animals roaming around with red eyes just waiting to eat you,  vampires awaiting for you just to fall asleep so they can bite your head off! Then there is the house that makes you have nightmares right on the spot, it was there house the evil families house. The evil family are set to something big, huge, enormous and gigantic but are waiting for the right moment........