Kia ora Karhmyn, It was great to hear from you yesterday and see that you are sharing your learning on your blog. I can see that you have worked really hard on your narrative writing and have used lots of descriptive words. The way you describe the characters and the scenes helps me to paint a picture in my mind of your story. I can imagine my spine would tingle in the creepy dark woods too when the wolves howl! I would LOVE to hear you reading your story. Maybe you could ask Whaea Maria to show you how to use Screencastify next time she is in your class. That way, you could record your voice reading your story alongside your google slides. Keep up the great work Karhmyn. Nga mihi nui Tania
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Kia ora Karhmyn,
ReplyDeleteIt was great to hear from you yesterday and see that you are sharing your learning on your blog. I can see that you have worked really hard on your narrative writing and have used lots of descriptive words. The way you describe the characters and the scenes helps me to paint a picture in my mind of your story. I can imagine my spine would tingle in the creepy dark woods too when the wolves howl! I would LOVE to hear you reading your story. Maybe you could ask Whaea Maria to show you how to use Screencastify next time she is in your class. That way, you could record your voice reading your story alongside your google slides. Keep up the great work Karhmyn.
Nga mihi nui
Tania