Explanation writing: Why the sea is salty By Karhmyn

Wednesday 31st August 2016

Explanation Writing

Why the sea is salty

Did you know that seventy percent of the earth is covered in water and thirty percent is land? Well all over the world, most of the water is salty.

When it rain, water flows through soil into the rocks. We all know that rocks contain chemicals. Salt is one of them. Then the salty water flows through the river and into the sea.

On an extremely hot day water evaporates. Only water evaporates. This is what forms clouds.

Over millions and millions years, salty water has been flowing from the rivers into the sea. Hence the sea is very salty. This cycle continues on and on.

Insert the correct adjectives

Tuesday 30th August 2016

Adjectives

Insert the correct adjectives below

A fool action: foolish

A storm sea: stormy

An awe sight : awful

A pity city: pitiful

A gold opportunity: golden

A noise street: noisy
A mountain country: mountainous

A fame pianist: famous

Why animals shouldn't be held in captivity

Monday 15th August 2016

Why animals should not be held in captivity.

Most people would agree why animals shouldn’t be held in captivity. I will convince beyond doubt as to why animals shouldn’t be held in captivity.

Doesn’t everybody know that God has created all animals to be free? Animals are born free, the zoo isn’t their natural environment. The forests and wild are their natural environment. The real truth is that we shouldn’t be keeping animals in captivity. Would you like to be held in an  enclosure?

In the zoo, people who visit the animals mock and tease them. Only a fool would not know if animals have feelings or not. Just because they are different to us doesn’t mean we must be cruel towards them. Did you know throwing rubbish, cigarettes, and stones can harm the innocent animals?  Would like stuff to be thrown at you?

In the zoos the animals are fed with food full of chemicals. When the animals are fed, could affect the health of the animals. This could lead to sickness and even death. If the animals were kept out in the wild they would know how to obtain or find their own food. Keeping them in an enclosure, they wouldn’t have a clue what to do in the wild. The animals need natural food that is  beneficial to their bodies to make them healthy and strong.

You know in the zoos there are animals that need to be let out. Here are three animals that need to be let out into the wild. Firstly tigers are born to hunt. If the tigers are held in captivity they will not know what to do, because all their food is getting thrown at them without them hunting it themselves. If you released  them into the wild they would have no clue what to do in the wild. Therefore tigers would be lazy if you keep them held in captivity because everything is being done for them. Secondly birds are born with wings, when they are ready to be let out they fly away but when the  birds are held in captivity they wouldn’t be able to fly because the space is restricted. Lastly the monkeys  shouldn’t be held in captivity. Monkeys should be jumping around, swinging on vines and hanging upside down. But did you know in the zoos, the space is restricted. If you go to the zoo and see their face they are not as happy as they would be in their natural habitat.

In conclusion, I have provided you with adequate reasons as to why animals shouldn't be held in captivity. I have reminded you that the food is mixed with chemicals, that the people who visit the zoo throw objects at them and the three animals that need to live in their natural environment. I now trust you would agree with me that animals shouldn’t be held in captivity.

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Why we shouldn't eat junk food

Thursday 4th August 2016

Why we should not eat junk food

You should consider not eating junk food. There are many reasons as to why we all shouldn't eat junk food. I will convince you beyond doubt as to why we shouldn't eat junk food.

Although we love junk food and it is delicious, junk food is high in sugar and salt. If your body takes in too much sugar and salt and do not burn it off you could become diabetic. Only a fool would treat their health irresponsible.By having diabetes you have to take medication everyday for the rest of your life. Would you want that? In the severe cases of diabetes gangrene sets in, this is where your body starts to rot because of poor blood flow. When gangrene rots you have to get operated on. The doctors cut wherever the gangrene is. Junk food also makes you obesity. Junk food lacks vitamins and fibre. This will make tired very quickly. A sensible idea would be to eat healthy so that it doesn't make us obesity and not get diabetes.

We all know that junk food contains chemicals. Chicken nuggets are one of them, they contains a lot of chemicals that are mixed together and prepared for you to buy and eat. Chemicals could lead you to cancer or sickness and then to death. Yes, we all know junk food is tasty and delicious but did you know that the ingredients are poor quality. The hamburgers that you purchase have meat of poor quality. Do you have any clue which part of the cow they use? You could spend your own money and buy your own meat and make your own burgers. Some fast food outlets have poor hygiene and have food poison and sickness.  

Did you know when you eat junk food the first point entry is your mouth. When junk food enters your mouth, it comes in contact with your teeth. Junk food is high is salt and sugar and start to rot. Problems get worse if you don’t brush your teeth regularly. If you have problems with your teeth you would probably need to see a dentist. When you visit the dentist it is costly. Surely you would agree that the money going towards the dentist could be spent on health food.

In conclusion, I trust that I have convinced you beyond doubt as to why we shouldn’t eat junk food. Remember that junk food is not good for your health. Junk food could lead you to obesity and diabetes or even death. A sensible idea would be to stay healthy and fit